More on the Talon build thread. Finishing off one of the Gattlings. Sorry about the lettering captions. After 76 the photos will have captions in their own dialogue box.
Silveroxide, from the picture where I see the main body I can see that you made a mistake when building it. It is the same I did with the Ultramarine Talon and that I fixed on Newobmij advice on the Blood raven (it is bad but I am happy that pretty much everybody is doing the same not just me).
The cockpit should be pushed back a lot more in the fuselage. Look at my version in the 360 you should find all the angles needed stormtalon spinand the GW version on their site (I think they have a 360 themselves, I have one in their digital codex)
Also I wait impatiently to see how you reinforced the fuselage and cockpit as well as how you'll do the clear canopy and the interior.
Regarding the heaviness of. Laminated tail. What I did is laminate with foam board which is lighter than the same thickness of card.
You are in every sense of the word, a teacher. I hope things can work out like we have talked about, I really do!![]()
107 and 108 are reversed? the gun tub looks painted in 107 and plain in 108. If I remember correctly you are going to get a few more fit issues underneath the talon due to the overextended cockpit.
Also I think you are adding much more than a little compared to what I had done in term of instructions as you are giving the next builder an idea of what build order to use.
I would say though that The most important things to clarify for a future builder is how to reinforce the body and the fit with the cockpit and tail. If the body is sturdy enough and the tail and cockpit are correctly attached to it, the rest is pretty clear and much easier as one has a robust platform to build upon.