Thank you very much! I hope you like the rest of the episodes, too. The final 5-parter is a MUST read, and I'm not kidding.Fun!
One thing did stand out to me. The line "Bermuda Triangle in space" this is a reference that only make sense to someone from Earth. I would alter that line to a different term, like "The Golan Enigma"
No worries and THANK YOU! I really appreciate your comments. BTW, the story is up (in English and German). I have added a few addititonal concept drawings which did not make it in the threads because they would have ruined the reading flow. Have fun and enjoy!Sorry, I missed that he is from Earth. So it makes sense. It was so jarring because you are so careful to use the lexicon from the series. Keep up the great work!